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missmara13I just managed to shock Bri!
Apparently she wasn't quite expecting the twist I pulled in Moments 16 with Sonny and Carly... lol
In other news, I'm writing ANOTHER GH fic now... lol Has some AU bits, but msotly everything up until tuesday's ep has happened with a few slight changes. I'm doing a cut for anyone who hasn't seen tuesday's ep for some reason... lol
Click below to read details...
Okay, first bit of AU: Liz had a one night thing with Lucky, not Zander, and is pregnant with Lucky's baby. NO ONE knows she's preggers yet, Lucky is definitely clueless.
2nd bit of AU: Carly's emotional attachments to memories are returning bit by bit. And her love for Sonny is there by the end of the first scene really.
Here's the first little scene, then mroe about the plot:
"We're coming out!" Carly called as she opened the door and stuck her head out. "Lucky, help me," she asked as she guided the injured Sonny out of the penthouse.
Lucky hurried to do so, putting his gun back in it's holster. "Here, let me," he said, trying to figure out a way to support Sonny without hurting the man's arm worse.
"Cuff him, Spencer!" Brian ordered.
Lucky ignored the other officer, intent on helping his cousin and her husband. "Just lean agains me, Sonny," he instructed.
Sonny nodded, letting Lucky slip under his injured arm and wrap an arm around his back to support him. Sonny looked up, a look of disbelief on his face as he saw the gun pointed right at Lucky's back. A gun held by the smirking Brian. "Lucky watch..." he tried to warn, but it was too late.
Lucky started to turn, dropping down and pulling Sonny and Carly with him, just as the gun went off, causing the bullet to hit him, not in the back, but in the side of the head.
Sonny gathered all his strength and shoved Carly back through the open door of the Penthouse, then dove for the gun on the ground. As his hand closed around the handle, he felt the sting of bullets hit his shoulder and side. He rolled over and quickly took aim, shooting Brian in the shoulder just as the door to the stairs flew open and more police burst in. As he squeezed the trigger, hsi eyes rolled bakc in his head and he passed out, his arm, with the gun, falling limply at his side.
Okay, so, that's the first scene, it shows what the big split from the show is... lol Anyway, from there it takes off. Lucky is left comatose and not expected to wake up, Sonny is badly injured. Carly is scared for both her husband and her cousin. Liz is upset she never told Lucky about the baby. Brian claims Sonny shot Lucky, and he only returned fire to protect himself. He figures he's in the clear, since no one will believe Sonny and Carly over him (Jason and Sam do believe them, but they don't have the best of reps as far as the PCPD's concerned... lol).
To make matters worse, Lorenzo is offering Carly the chance to save Sonny fromt eh police. All she has to do si divorce Sonny and marry Lorenzo. Then he'll not only make sure Sonny has the best medical care, he'll also get Sonny out of the country for safe keeping. Carly is forced to agree to save Sonny, but refuses to have Micheal and Morgan live with them, not trusting Lorenzo with the kids.
Courtney-The-Loon is thrilled because now she has M&M back with her. And Brian is only too eager to feed her delusions that M&M are better off with her. And when he starts worrying that his plan is falling apart, what better plan than to convince Courtney to run off with the kids, with him along as their protector?
If you read that, and have any title ideas, let me know. Something kinda edgy (Not something all soft and sweet, it's not a sweet story... lol).
Anyway, that is all for now.
Later.
Apparently she wasn't quite expecting the twist I pulled in Moments 16 with Sonny and Carly... lol
In other news, I'm writing ANOTHER GH fic now... lol Has some AU bits, but msotly everything up until tuesday's ep has happened with a few slight changes. I'm doing a cut for anyone who hasn't seen tuesday's ep for some reason... lol
Click below to read details...
Okay, first bit of AU: Liz had a one night thing with Lucky, not Zander, and is pregnant with Lucky's baby. NO ONE knows she's preggers yet, Lucky is definitely clueless.
2nd bit of AU: Carly's emotional attachments to memories are returning bit by bit. And her love for Sonny is there by the end of the first scene really.
Here's the first little scene, then mroe about the plot:
"We're coming out!" Carly called as she opened the door and stuck her head out. "Lucky, help me," she asked as she guided the injured Sonny out of the penthouse.
Lucky hurried to do so, putting his gun back in it's holster. "Here, let me," he said, trying to figure out a way to support Sonny without hurting the man's arm worse.
"Cuff him, Spencer!" Brian ordered.
Lucky ignored the other officer, intent on helping his cousin and her husband. "Just lean agains me, Sonny," he instructed.
Sonny nodded, letting Lucky slip under his injured arm and wrap an arm around his back to support him. Sonny looked up, a look of disbelief on his face as he saw the gun pointed right at Lucky's back. A gun held by the smirking Brian. "Lucky watch..." he tried to warn, but it was too late.
Lucky started to turn, dropping down and pulling Sonny and Carly with him, just as the gun went off, causing the bullet to hit him, not in the back, but in the side of the head.
Sonny gathered all his strength and shoved Carly back through the open door of the Penthouse, then dove for the gun on the ground. As his hand closed around the handle, he felt the sting of bullets hit his shoulder and side. He rolled over and quickly took aim, shooting Brian in the shoulder just as the door to the stairs flew open and more police burst in. As he squeezed the trigger, hsi eyes rolled bakc in his head and he passed out, his arm, with the gun, falling limply at his side.
Okay, so, that's the first scene, it shows what the big split from the show is... lol Anyway, from there it takes off. Lucky is left comatose and not expected to wake up, Sonny is badly injured. Carly is scared for both her husband and her cousin. Liz is upset she never told Lucky about the baby. Brian claims Sonny shot Lucky, and he only returned fire to protect himself. He figures he's in the clear, since no one will believe Sonny and Carly over him (Jason and Sam do believe them, but they don't have the best of reps as far as the PCPD's concerned... lol).
To make matters worse, Lorenzo is offering Carly the chance to save Sonny fromt eh police. All she has to do si divorce Sonny and marry Lorenzo. Then he'll not only make sure Sonny has the best medical care, he'll also get Sonny out of the country for safe keeping. Carly is forced to agree to save Sonny, but refuses to have Micheal and Morgan live with them, not trusting Lorenzo with the kids.
Courtney-The-Loon is thrilled because now she has M&M back with her. And Brian is only too eager to feed her delusions that M&M are better off with her. And when he starts worrying that his plan is falling apart, what better plan than to convince Courtney to run off with the kids, with him along as their protector?
If you read that, and have any title ideas, let me know. Something kinda edgy (Not something all soft and sweet, it's not a sweet story... lol).
Anyway, that is all for now.
Later.
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Date: 2003-12-03 08:18 am (UTC)LMAO
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