Emily is pretty. It's good you gave us a face to a name. Helps us when we're reading.
I forgot Sadie? Damn, I really thought I had them all. Maybe it was the fact that you hadn't mentioned her much or that she wasn't in this chapter (or was she?) or that I don't know what she looks like. I have to do some research on that matter. But fifteen is a big group.
Yay, more alone time for my favourite couples. *gives Mara a hug*
Yep, I could imagine Trey saying the first comment, but I also could imagine him thinking about the second. You really get into Atwood-brothers' heads. I wish I could. Aaaand, when Trey thinks about her with her own kids he could also start to think about how she got those kids and I bet Trey has a very vivid imagination. But I bet he already has thought of that.
My mind needs a serious scrubbing. For some reason it's filthy tonight.
And a little OT, since it doesn't actually have anything to do with this fic... When you're gonna update 'Another Day'? I'm starting to miss it.
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Date: 2006-11-15 05:26 am (UTC)I forgot Sadie? Damn, I really thought I had them all. Maybe it was the fact that you hadn't mentioned her much or that she wasn't in this chapter (or was she?) or that I don't know what she looks like. I have to do some research on that matter. But fifteen is a big group.
Yay, more alone time for my favourite couples. *gives Mara a hug*
Yep, I could imagine Trey saying the first comment, but I also could imagine him thinking about the second. You really get into Atwood-brothers' heads. I wish I could. Aaaand, when Trey thinks about her with her own kids he could also start to think about how she got those kids and I bet Trey has a very vivid imagination. But I bet he already has thought of that.
My mind needs a serious scrubbing. For some reason it's filthy tonight.
And a little OT, since it doesn't actually have anything to do with this fic... When you're gonna update 'Another Day'? I'm starting to miss it.
Good to hear you plan to update fairly soon.