I'm in ! LOL I think, that the flashbacks would be great if they weren't in order, 'cause if so, it's make us feel like we were in the present, you know, a flashback following another, like a day after the other. But in disorder, it'd make us take a journey in Ryan's life (yeah, i like metaphors). Question : would you insert some present tense about Sandy's being ill?
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Date: 2008-02-12 08:44 am (UTC)I think, that the flashbacks would be great if they weren't in order, 'cause if so, it's make us feel like we were in the present, you know, a flashback following another, like a day after the other. But in disorder, it'd make us take a journey in Ryan's life (yeah, i like metaphors).
Question : would you insert some present tense about Sandy's being ill?